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From the ashes
The sky was filled with dark clouds, heavy with water. A man walked into a graveyard. There was sections of tombstones, listing names of people long dead, going as far back as the start of the fire kingdom. The kingdom of fire was one of eight kingdoms, each ruled by a peacekeeper, a lord. There were 3 lords managing time, space and balance, called grand lords. The grand lords and the lords were kept in check by 2 lords, supreme lords, the lord of life, Kigen, and the lord of death, Hados. The man who entered the graveyard was the current lord of fire, Ash Lire Phore. Ash had long bright orange hair and emerald green eyes. He had on a golden orange trench coat going down to his ankles. Ash also had on worn blue jeans with red converses and a white tank top. Ash had a muscular speedy build. Under his trench coat, Ash had two orange phoenix wings, Ash had folded them to hide them.. On either side of Ash was a katana. The one of the right had a bright orange edge to the blade and the one
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A bored Kitsume
A kitsume girl wearing purple kimono robs walks out of her room. He had long white hair and red eyes. Her fox ears and fox tail were white. She walked around Valhalla till she saw Maria with her now blonde hair. The song "Freaks" could be heard playing. "Maria?" Maria jumped and quickly changed the song to classical music by typing on a touch screen panel on Valhalla's console. "Hey Tsumi" Tsumi walked into Valhalla's main hall. "Where... you listening to 'freaks'?" "No..." "Anyways, what's up with you and Densetsu." "Hm?" "Granted, I've been here for only a couple months but... you act like a over baring mother on Hero and Densetsu doesn't care. So... why was he the 2nd paladin, heck, why is he even a paladin?" Maria sighs "Truth of the mater is that Densetsu does care... he just hides it. You see... he's sorta a lone wolf. He fights alone. He works alone. He IS alone. When Hero made him a paladin... he left behind a wife and 2 kids. When he became a Paladin, they were dead... died in
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Prepare yourselves, I'm planning to upload 23 pieces of are that I made during my time in ap art. I'm also planning on starting to put up things explaining my stories.
So... Last night, I went in front of the board of review for my eagle. After an hour of questions, I got it.  I GOT EAGLE!

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Marc Bursiel
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United States
Hello. My name is Marc Bursiel. I'm an 18 year old who loves to write long stories about people whose lives had been turned upside down because of an event or something and how they respond to such disasters. I own Maruku, a scientist who can manipulate one of the things that make life in my stories, Arua, as well having a dragon sealed in him called Icess. I also own Ash, an 18 year old who is half Phoenix and who can manipulate fire, Paradox, a 25 year old who was part of a guard till his city and all of its people were frozen over. Paradox doesn't have any powers, all his power comes from a sword called the Casad Amser, a hilt that creates a blade from either Mana, Ether, or Arua, all things that make up life. The Casad Amser has the power to slow down time. I also own Zero Luimiere, a brilliant sorcerer who is 16 and who as all ready mastered one of six types of magic in my stories, white. In my stories, magic is used by signs called signis. There are six; white ( which is normally used for healing and barriers), black ( it's more attack based), time ( skill based magic), alchemy ( creating stuff), taboo( think black magic but with no limits) and purity (think better white magic that uses more mana). Zero wields the Valor's dawn, a scepter that powerful enough to handle a jewel called the Philosopher's crystal. Magic in my Stories is limited by jewels. More lighter hued jewels use the white signi only, darker hued jewels use the black signi only, jewels that that have a yellow hue are used for the time signi only, jewels that are harder to cut are better at the alchemy signi, the taboo signi can only be used by jewels that are really dark, near black, or dark jewel jewels, like bloodstone, and the purity signi can only be used by jewels that have a REALLY light hue, near white, or jewels that are a light blue, like moonstone. Alexandrite can use all six, but they're half as powerful, philosopher stones (onyx, Iolite or bloodstone purged with white, black, time and alchemy signis and infused with either mithirl, orichalum, astral silver or bitumen to be purified) can use white, black, time and alchemy signis to their fullest, but can't use the taboo signi or they'll implud when the signi is casted. The Philosopher's crystal was created by Zero to combat the taboo signi's corrupting effect on the use so that Zero could use it to take on anyone Zero faced. However, it did more. The philosopher's crystal is made from black sardonyx, sapphire, rose quartz, amethyst, yellow zircon, green peridot and alexandrite fused together to get the crystal. Since we are talking about jewels and how they affect magic, clusters are usable, but they backfire easily, Jewels that are more metal based can be used on their own instead of using a metal rod, staff, necklace, or ring; jewels that are more Quartz based can amplify a jewel's magic capability in exchange for efficiency, jewels that are more crystal based are more efficient in exchange for power, fake jewels will explode, jewels created by alchemy work was well as normal jewels but are a ting more durable. Finally, more bendable metals, like tin, are horrible for magic, as metals like steel and titanium are more preferred. How can someone lift a steel pole with ease? Magic. Anyways, if you got to this point, I should tell you that melee weapons can use magic too, but the magic is not as effective. *breaths* Anyways, after that onslaught of text, I also own my persona, Hero. Hero is the creator of Zero, Paradox, Ash and Maruku's worlds. He resides in Valhalla. Thank you for reading all of this mess.
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MetalAgamid Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy birthday, man! :party:
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theforgotenhero Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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TanjatheBat Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015  Professional General Artist
Thanks for the fav. :)
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theforgotenhero Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Not a problem
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Alexthehegehoge Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015  Student Artist
Hero
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theforgotenhero Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes?
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Zwirrlicht Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the +fav ! :D
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theforgotenhero Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, Ringabel is awesome and your drawing of alternate dimension is awesome.
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Zwirrlicht Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! :iconblushplz:
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theforgotenhero Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Not a problem
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Rentyn Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the watch!
I really appreciate it! 
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Fyrae Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch! :)
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theforgotenhero Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You survived hammerheadtuner, you deserve it . 
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:iconfliptableplz: 
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theforgotenhero Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome
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lemontea Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
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theforgotenhero Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG! The creator of the llama... putted a llama on my page.
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lemontea Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
It's what I'm here for!
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theforgotenhero Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
YEAH!!!!
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